The neon sign atop the Nevada State Bank across the street is flashing the time, then the temperature. 2:59. 101. 2:59. 101. 3:00. 101. A few hours before dawn and still over a hundred degrees. Yeah, but it’s a dry heat. As if that matters. As if no one ever died from triple digits, no two year old strapped into the back seat of an SUV while his mother shops for one last pair of bargain-priced shoes.
It’s the end of a miserable week, a lousy month. Just when you think it can’t get any worse, it does. Yet always, just down the block, there’s Hope leaning against a lamp post, a cigarette dangling from her lips, smoke veiling her face, skirt hiked up with promise.
So, I say good bye to any thought of sleep, lock the door behind me, and take to the street. The El Rancho Boulder Motel is only two blocks away and I figure I’ll brave the heat and walk it. Boulder City is nothing like the Strip. No pedestrian traffic at this hour. No traffic of any kind. The parking lot is vacant. The street lights echo in the stillness.
Willy is behind the front desk, perched atop a cushioned stool. He looks up at me and smiles his crooked smile. His teeth are perfect. A large hooked nose, brown eyes and black, unkempt hair all set against his dark olive complexion are proof of his East Indian heritage. But he’s born and raised in the states and his speech has the flat, nasal cadence of Cleveland.
“The coffee fresh?”
He looks up at the clock over his shoulder. “Maybe an hour old.”
I pour myself a cup and hand him two dollars. “I’ll take a paper, too.”
“Wait an hour and you can get today’s”
I shrug. “Doesn’t matter.”
Just then the door jangles open. I can see the reflection of a tall, string bean of a kid in the glass case at Willie’s back. Willie’s eyes grow wide and I turn to catch the kid slip a black trash bag over his head and position the eye holes so that he can see out. A small-caliber gun appears almost magically in his hand. Willie starts to move but I stop him with a look. I set my cup of coffee down and turn slowly, lazily, resting my back against the counter. The kid moves in quickly.
“No funny business,” he says to Willie. ” Just hand over the cash.”
“First time?” I ask.
He turns his face to me but the bag doesn’t move and he has to readjust it to see out. “What?”
“First time? The reason I ask is that we’ve already seen your face.” I nod up at the video camera on the wall above Willie’s head. “You’ve got to plan ahead next time. Put the bag on before you come in.”
“You a wise guy?”
I shake my head. “Nope. But I know for a fact that Willie here’s got a .357 under the counter. The moment you finish up and make for the door there’s going to be quite a commotion. Sort of like the old west. A regular shoot out. One of us is most likely going to get hurt. And I’d hate it to be me. Or Willie. Armed robbery’s bad enough but if someone gets killed it’s the death penalty. Yes, indeed. Now, so far nothing’s happened here. Just a couple of guys having a talk. So why not put the gun away. Take off the mask. You’ve got to be sweating bullets under that thing.”
The kid doesn’t move. It’s as if he’s contemplating what might be best.
“Willie, how much you figure you got in the till?” I ask.
Willie doesn’t take his eyes off the gun. “Twenty dollars, maybe. It’s been a slow night.”
“Do me a favor,” I say to the kid. “I’ll lend you the twenty. That way there’s been no harm. You can get on with your life and we can get on with ours.”
“Can I trust you?”
“No complaints so far!”
He nods. “OK.”
I move slowly to my wallet, take it from my back pocket and remove a twenty. I lay the bill on the counter.
The kid grabs the bottom edge of the plastic bag and rips it from his head. He looks to be in his mid twenties, not bad looking but with a large nose and close-set eyes that make him appear a bit dopey! His blond hair is matted with sweat. His face is flushed. He reaches for the twenty and knocks my coffee cup on its side, spilling the contents onto yesterday’s news.
“I’m sorry,” he says as he watches the coffee drip.
Willie shakes his head. “Who’s going to pay for this mess?”
“How much?” the kid asks.
“Seventy five cents for the coffee.”
“And the paper?”
“Fifty cents.”
“Well, kid?” I say, doing the math. “Looks like you owe a buck twenty-five.”
The kid doesn’t hesitate. He reaches into his front pocket and comes out with a crumpled single and a quarter and hands it to Willie, then turns and walks dejectedly out the door. I pick up the twenty he’s forgotten and place it back into my wallet. Willie’ s eyes are wide in amazement. Or maybe it’s amusement. I’m still not sure.
“That .357 I supposedly have under the counter,” he says. “Do I know how to use it?”
“You wouldn’t have had to,” I tell him. “The kid’s safety was on!”
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Love the story Emilio!!!! I think you should be writing books, and illustrating them with your fabulous photos! 🙂
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Thanks, Elina. Maybe when I get more time. But this interest in photography keeps me pretty busy.
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I just can’t get old black and white films out of my head when I look at this . I expect a Sam Spade voice-over telling the story of “some Dame and…” well you get the picture:0)
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Thanks, David. It sounds like you didn’t read my commentary below the photo. Either way, I agree with you. Sam Spade, Philip Marlowe, etc. Thanks again for the comment.
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Love, love, love it!!!
Emilio, you need to tell more stories!! ❤
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OK, well, did you hear the one about this young girl who runs away from home and ends up living with seven midgets- I’m sorry, but that word is no longer socially acceptable. Seven vertically challenged men? She cooks for them, cleans for them, and, you know, tends to all their needs….
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all their needs? … I don’t think Disney told that version 🙂
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Disney has stolen my idea?
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They are shameless.
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I love your photography, but you are also a very talented writer! I know the writing takes more work, but it also challenges your mind in a different way. I sure hope to see more of it in the future! Excellent!
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Thanks, Gale. I don’t promise anything but maybe one day soon…. 🙂 Do you have a blog? Your gravatar doesn’t mention one.
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Great pic and great story. You might be the next Stephen King. How cool would that be!
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Stephen King is very strange looking. I picture myself more like James Franco. With Stephen King’s money! 😉
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That’s what my wife said on our wedding night, “Well, well… you are full of surprises.” 😉
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Well, well…you are full of surprises. Writing is like a job, you say? That means you are good at your job. I really liked your story and the image is very captivating.
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Brilliant, Emilio! Really. Fantastic piece of writing.
Of course, I want an episode 2!
Cool shot, too 🙂
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Episode 2 may take a while. Could I interest you in another sign photo?
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Thanks, Tim. I took a few shots in the morning but had to come back at night to get it lit. It looks so much better as a night shot.
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Oh what a wonderful neon sign.
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Great photo and story. 😀
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Thanks, Raewyn. I see you changed your photo. It looks good!
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Photo by Emilio !
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Emilio, we all know you have a way with words, but you definitely have a gift for the written story! Loved this!! Great marriage of image and words – and as Joe said above, we want more, more, more!!
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Me? A way with words? Ah, shucks! Thanks. As for more, more, more, I would have to ignore my wife much more than I already do. This story took quite a bit of time- almost a full week- whereas a photo takes me maybe 30 minutes. Sometimes an hour! OK, it is more expensive, photography. But just so much more enjoyable in the doing.
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A great scene Emilio, in so many ways!
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Thanks, Patti!
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Awesome image and story Emilio 🙂 Not wordy at all and wonderfully done. We want more, we want more !
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Thanks, Joe. There might be more in the future at some point but writing is too much like work! Not like photography, which is fun!
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If I was as talented as you are with writing I would write more 🙂 I agree though photography is more fun !
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I think, as I get more and more involved with finding and shooting older cars and buildings, more stories may come to mind. I do like the hard boiled detective genre and so my writing tends to be more clipped. Thanks, Joe!
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Emilio, what a fantastic story, so well written and perfectly paired with your image! I believe you are the next Raymond Chandler!
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Yes, I love his writing. I was hoping to channel him in the story but didn’t want to make it too obvious. Not like I was copying his style or anything! 🙂
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….and a perfect image!
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Thanks. I’m not sure if I like it in color or b & w best but the high res version did not come out as well as I had hoped!
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I think it’s quite fabulous~ and you’re right it screams, “noir~” …fantastic photo with a great story! A Perfect combination!
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I LOVE THIS!!!! Such a great story!! Well done! ♡♡
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Thanks, West! I always picture myself as the narrator but I’m probably closer to the kid in personality! 🙂
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Emilio! You need to write more often! What a great story … you had me feeling sorry for the kid, laughing at the hotel clerk wondering if he knew how to use the .357, and bemoaning the heat. You hooked me from the start!
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Thanks, Laurie. I appreciate your comment about my writing but writing is like work for me. I’d much rather take photos. That’s fun!!
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Great story! Love the photo!
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Thanks, Tim!
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